Short story Help - thanks and here it is

[CobberKane]

Hi All. A while back I posted a thread asking for input on a short story I was writing as part of my studies, and I said I would post it when complete. Sorry about the delay but here it is:

Midway Short Story

...and don't expect Hemmingway.

 

[VBF-13]

You got the knack, Shirley.

 

[nuuumannn]

Nice one, Shirley

 

[CobberKane]

Nice one, Shirley

Thanks...and don't call me Shirley

 

[nuuumannn]

Sorry Cobber (jocular slap on the back....)

Seriously though, good story.

 

[CobberKane]

Sorry Cobber (jocular slap on the back....)

Seriously though, good story.

"Don't call me Shirley" is the standard reply, nuuum. If you haven't seen the movie get it - hilarious

 

[CobberKane]

[created in error)

 

[nuuumannn]

"Don't call me Shirley"

Ahhh Leslie Nielsen! The penny's dropped!!!

 

[norab]

Great job, You have a real talent for it, much future sucess

 

[TheMustangRider]

Amazing job CobberKane! Congratulations for the elegant and well-written story you made, I enjoyed every second of it as I do with most stories and first-hand accounts which manage to create a very clear picture in your mind of the events taking place.
I must thank you as well for inspiring me to finish myself a short story (aerial warfare-oriented as well) I've been experimenting with for some time now.