Short story Help - thanks and here it is

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  1. CobberKane

    CobberKane Banned

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    Hi All. A while back I posted a thread asking for input on a short story I was writing as part of my studies, and I said I would post it when complete. Sorry about the delay but here it is:

    Midway Short Story

    ...and don't expect Hemmingway.
     
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    You got the knack, Shirley. :)
     
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    Nice one, Shirley :)
     
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    Thanks...and don't call me Shirley
     
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    Sorry Cobber (jocular slap on the back....)

    Seriously though, good story.
     
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    "Don't call me Shirley" is the standard reply, nuuum. If you haven't seen the movie get it - hilarious
     
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    Ahhh Leslie Nielsen! The penny's dropped!!!
     
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    Great job, You have a real talent for it, much future sucess
     
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    Amazing job CobberKane! Congratulations for the elegant and well-written story you made, I enjoyed every second of it as I do with most stories and first-hand accounts which manage to create a very clear picture in your mind of the events taking place.
    I must thank you as well for inspiring me to finish myself a short story (aerial warfare-oriented as well) I've been experimenting with for some time now.
     
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