Negative Creep
Staff Sergeant
Ok people, my dissertation is due on Wednesday morning (yes I know I should of done this quite some time ago!) It's an account of the RAF and FAA in the Far East theatre and I would really appreciate if you took the time to have a look at what I've written. The bulk of the project is a chronological account which I now have in draft form. A few things to consider
- It's primarily an account of the RAF but mention is made of the other forces and Pacific theatre where appropriate.
- Prelude, conclusion and tactics are discussed in separate chapters
- It's written for someone with a limited understanding of the topic (there is a glossary)
- Ignore the references
Above all please be honest, don't just say it's great to be nice. If you think it's rubbish or doesn't make sense then say so. If there's anything I've missed out, any historical or grammatical errors, no matter how small, please point them out! I'll break it into sections to make it a bit easier on the eye
- It's primarily an account of the RAF but mention is made of the other forces and Pacific theatre where appropriate.
- Prelude, conclusion and tactics are discussed in separate chapters
- It's written for someone with a limited understanding of the topic (there is a glossary)
- Ignore the references
Above all please be honest, don't just say it's great to be nice. If you think it's rubbish or doesn't make sense then say so. If there's anything I've missed out, any historical or grammatical errors, no matter how small, please point them out! I'll break it into sections to make it a bit easier on the eye