Very nice indeed! And there's not a lot wrong with the camera work either!
One little thing though - just use the edge of a brush and run a little RLM 66 up the edges of the windscreen frame, to eliminate the 'show through' . (The surface which is facing to the rear of the cockpit).
Bl**dy nice work though - and tell her indoors not to even touch the models, let alone dust them!!
(But be sure to say please!!!)