I know that the artistic quality of the photo doesn't reveal as much detail as some people might like, but I liked your version better. It made the Shinden display appear mysterious and imposing!
Mysterious and imposing. Yes, that would be what art students intended.
Though I reported the same topic before, they dared to build their Shinden in the old original factory of Kyusyu Aircraft company which is now called Watanabe Ironworks.