Regarding the thick wing of the Hurricane - that would be a problem ONLY as speeds went over the 350 mark and crept up towards 400. At the much lower speeds at which the Battle of Britain was fought, the thick wing was of fairly negligible importance.
Remember, I am talking about the Battle of Britain scenario, where there most pressing need was not for small numbers of high speed aircraft, but large numbers of passable aircraft built as quickly as possible and being repaired rapidly...and capable of being flown by the thousands of new pilots being hurriedly commissioned.
And let's not forget that many of the German aircraft, both bombers and fighters, attacked by Spits in 1940 lived to limp home to Occupied France to fight another day...because of the inadequate armament of eight rifle calibre machine guns. While the best solution was the 20 mm cannon, there just weren't enough of them in 1940 and they had reliability and ammunition supply problems as well.
So the 12 browning solution was the best available at the time. And the Spit couldn't carry 12 brownings.
The radial Hurricane would have been the perfect solution in 1940, and as the war went on and it was slowly replaced by (say) Tempests, it could have had a great secondary career as an advanced trainer and a ground attack aircraft!
As far as the Battle of Britain, I think you're right about the Hurricane. As it was, the Hurricane shot down more aircraft than the Spitfire anyway, and with your modifications it would have done even better. I guess I was looking more long-term. I definitely agree about it making for a good advanced trainer.
Venganza