I think the problem with the Ki-84 propellor was wartime rushed production, along with loss of unskilled staff etc It must have worked OK on the well maintained prototypes. Its likely any weakness in the system affected the high speed/power pitch for the kind of reasons you mentioned. Japanese WW2 electrics do not have a good reputation.
One Japanese site I've recently found WW2航空機の性能:WarbirdPerformanceBlog (mentioned here on WW2aircraft somewhere?) says there were basically 3 versions of Homare, and when you understand that all the aircraft performance figures make more sense.
Ha-45-11 early production not good, boost limited , most prototype planes 1943 early 1944 used this engine!
Ha-45-12 good engine basically same as Ha-45-21 but boost limited, used on bombers more.
Ha-45-21 the planned design full boost, used on fighters more.
He also considers differences in stated HP critical heights is due to different planes have different cowl ram air intakes.
One Japanese site I've recently found WW2航空機の性能:WarbirdPerformanceBlog (mentioned here on WW2aircraft somewhere?) says there were basically 3 versions of Homare, and when you understand that all the aircraft performance figures make more sense.
Ha-45-11 early production not good, boost limited , most prototype planes 1943 early 1944 used this engine!
Ha-45-12 good engine basically same as Ha-45-21 but boost limited, used on bombers more.
Ha-45-21 the planned design full boost, used on fighters more.
He also considers differences in stated HP critical heights is due to different planes have different cowl ram air intakes.