Aaron, the panel lines in the green will probably show up once a matt clear coat is applied. This is sometimes why panel lines turn out a touch too heavy, as the modeller thinks they can't be seen, repeats the pencil work then, when clear coated - oh dear!
A little trick to check, lick your finger tip and dampen the area where the pencilled lines are. This gives the effect of the clear coat, and is a rough indication of how well they will show up.