Looks ok to me in either guise, although second attempt looks better. I was going to do the same scheme on'Yellow11', an E-3, for the BoB GB, but ran out of time due to the work needed to correct the Hasegawa 1/32nd scale kit. I had a quick practice, on a scrap model, doing the stripes free hand, close in, and it worked fine. Will get around to doing the model eventually!