My Semester Project - Need Suggestions on Graphics!

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Which one you like better?

  1. navrh_1.jpg

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  2. navrh_2.jpg

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  3. none of them - make a better one

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  1. Pisis

    Pisis Active Member

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    Hi,

    I'm slowly finishing my school year project called Jewish Soldiers in Czechoslovak Army in USSR during WW2 - A Lion with Star of David

    For this, I'll use several graphics, such as for the front page, footers, etc...

    Now here's two samples for the front page...

    Both show a Czech national symbol - a doble-tailed Lion with several attributes that have something to do with this theme. In the first one, you cann see a lion that is holding a sword and has a "Jude" star patch instead of the crown.
    The other one is crushing the german eagle with a spear which holds a czechoslovak flag on the top of it.

    Please tell me which one you like better:





    Any suggestions, comments etc are welcomed!
    Thanks!!!
     

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    The 2nd one is better, if a bit out of proportion.

    But the fuzzy edges on the graphics are putting me off...
     
  3. Gnomey

    Gnomey World Travelling Doctor
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    I agree Clave, the second one is better Pisis.
     
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    The second one is better. Although in the first one, if the Star of David is fixed to the spear, that would look just as nice.
     
  5. Pisis

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    ok, you got me thinking........... *works in his proggy*
     
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    On the second one, give the lion one of those "Juden" patches the jews were forced to wear.
     
  7. Pisis

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    The point of my work is they didn't, as they were members in the Czechoslovak army in USSR......

    Here is the final I think:
     

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    I liked the 2nd one. The 3rd one that you just did to me is just a bit over kill.
     
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