Not wrong, just not enough feathering of the putty line....
Lemme tell u something Harrison, u are getting more tutorial knowledge on ur model here than Ive ever seen before, and at such a young age too... Hats off to u for trying to put forth the best effort....
Learning 101 man....
The fact that u have an expert like Wojtek giving u these pics and lessons is just about unequivacol in this hobby.... I didnt have this kinda help back in my day as a kid... Ur very lucky and if u keep up with the hobby (girls usually take over) u'll end up being one hell of a modeler...